Intro 1
I never knew it
was possible to connect with someone so easily and quick. It was two
and a half years ago now, but I remember him walking through the
doors of my house. My first thought was “Who is this scrawny kid
with the glasses and why is he in my house!?” Within the first
hour he became my friend, and by the end of the night he became my
husband.
Intro 2
I never thought I
would utter the words “we're getting married” Then again, I
didn't mean it so literal. My boyfriend is someone who means the
world to me. From the day we met I labeled him my husband. For some
reason he plays along and calls me his wife. Our relationship
bloomed from strangers to friends to an incredible relationship
within one night.
Combination of 1 and 2 creating intro 3
I never thought I
would utter the words “we're getting married” Then again, I
didn't mean it so literal. It was two and a half years ago now, but
I remember it as if it was yesterday. From the day we met I labeled
him my husband. For some reason he plays along and calls me his
wife. Our relationship bloomed from strangers to friends to an
incredible relationship within one night.
I don't see this setting up yet as offering reasons exactly--more like a process of how it happened--not why it happened.
ReplyDeleteI think we need a stronger hook too, some detail, some scene-setting, maybe dialogue.